So Out Of Control...

Inspired by Jasey Rae.

I've never told a lie

I guess that makes me a liar

I've never made a bet

We all gamble with desire

I've never lit a match

With the intent to start a fire

And yet somehow, the flames are out of control...

                      ...Out of control...

...Out of control...

 

I never fought his love

With desire to break a heart

I never rejected his explanations

To try and rip us apart

I never tried to upset him

When I knew what it would cause

And yet somehow, we've become so far apart...

               ...So far apart...

...So far apart...

 

Reviews

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

I like the structure of this one as well. It tells emotions and perspectives in a simple way, but you make it fun and relatable throughout. Good pen....

[DavidRyan]

I like this a lot. So simple. The best part about it is the structure. I like how you have to read the entire page to get the entire poem. Favorite part has to be "I never told a lie; guess that makes me a liar." Keep it up.