Teenagers !!

 

 

 

Widely talked about,

Highly misunderstood,

With new fears of the times ahead,

And fresh memories of childhood!

 

Imagination is boundless,

Urges are outrageous,

Teenagers are extremists,

Some meek, rest rampageous!

 

They see the world in black and white,

Missing out the shades of grey,

Life is either marvelous,

Or it is going astray….!

 

They border between tender and prime,

Is the edge where stand the teenagers,

Which is teeming with towering energies,

But fraught with risks and dangers!

 

They love to voice their opinions,

And long to be independent,

They rebel against their elders,

And express deep resentments!

 

All they need is someone thoughtful,

Someone who understands their plight,

Someone who values their ideas,

And leads them in their quest for right!

 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The best days of a life is being young with freedom and choice still. Your poem is outstanding. Your description and detail was filled with truth and options. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[deeps]

This is a wonderful write here
I really enjoyed this write.
It is hard to understand teenagers. Like this

[Senseless whatever]

Excellent! Very well said. I love the entire expression, the power and enthusiasm you express.

[maryjaneuy]

nice write. i can relate to this since I'm also a teen. You've done such a nice work and I'm hoping that many teens out there can have the chance to read. nice choice of words. very descriptive. keep it up! :D

[jhed]

wow..I'm a teenager..i knew how you understood teenager 'cause I guess you're one..very interesting and amazing..you've done well

They see the world in black and white,
Missing out the shades of grey,
Life is either marvelous,
Or it is going astray….!

I love this stanza..It's a good read!
thanks..!