The rainbow of my life !!

The rainbow of my life !!

A Poem by Simple_mee
"

The things that add colours to my life...

"

 

Voilet for MYSELF

My body, My soul

My thoughts and actions

Which I love a lot...

 

Indigo for my COMPUTER

My pal, My passion

The love of my life since I was three

Wish it continues to be...

 

Blue for my NOVELS

My fantasies and journeys

The world of Snow White and Harry Potter

Which I relish very muchly...

 

Green for my FRIENDS

My golds and Platinums

The Suns when I am cold

And  My sweet warm Blankets...

 

Yellow for my SISTER

A large part of my world

The fights, the Hugs

Which make my day ecstatic...

 

Orange for my PAPA

My idol, my My pillar

The one who stands by

Even when I do the wrong...

 

Red for my MOM

My mentor, my lullaby

One who doesn’t complain

Even when i shout and run away...

 

These are the seven colours in my life

The rainbow of my being

Wish the love never fades

And stays even without the SUN and the RAIN !!

 

 

© 2010 Simple_mee


Author's Note

Simple_mee
The colours of the rainbow have been described in the fashion with the colour with he shorter wavelength at the top n the longer wavelength at the bottom. So the colour at the bottom is the most important...

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Loved the vividness of the colors and expressions. They brought everything to rich life! Your words are tender, covering this canvass with beauty.

Posted 14 Years Ago


i thought some parts of this were better than others...
but the overall message was simple and yet so beautiful... i think you should work on this a little longer and see where it goes...


Posted 14 Years Ago


nice depiction in relation to a rainbow :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


so i seem to hav provided a constructive suggestion!! :P Made ur writin complete!! :D haha... Its PERFECT NOW!!! :)))

Posted 14 Years Ago


Sorry harman dear! Freinds added, tho I cudnt add another colour but made the adjustments !! Nothing complete without friends, dont know how that slipped out of my silly mind !!

Posted 14 Years Ago


lovely write!!! :) I was smiling n enjoyin it so much!!! But my dear darling you forgot ur friends..... Gonna kill u for that!!! :((( Add a new color to ur rainbow n let it b for freinds!!! :P
I loved it! :)))

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Really good !! :D :D

Posted 14 Years Ago



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