A promise!!

 

 

 

Even as twilight draws closer,

the stars give way to dawn,

clouds hover over the sky,

rain washes the dirt away,

the seasons may march on,

the years pass on,

My eyes may grow Weak,

leave my heart all alone,

I wont care for the world,

Waiting day in and day out,

dreaming of your warmth,

never leaving my place,

Hit me with a stick,

Hit me by saying he wont return,

I will be waiting till I breathe my last,

'cause I promised you my love....

 

 

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Seems time and age pass on and on but love endures .. lovely flow to this, makes me smile and feel good for the day ..

promises are made to be kept .. here you have it so.

[Senseless whatever]

Very Good one. Nice flow and an easy serene feeling.

[An owl on the moon]

What a profound write, filled with the depth of true love found in the treasure of the promise... Your words bring about a world that stands still, while all else drifts passed... Beautiful!

[maryjaneuy]

cute poem. This proves that not all promises are just made to be broken. :)

[Dev]

aww... nice :)

[harman kour]

Beauty dear!!! "cause I promised you my love"... wow!!! Oh.. It makes me feel that Love is so pious and selfless and beyond narrowness of our mind... It flows very well and i enjoyed reading it! A very good write! :)

[Princy]

Awww! The poem is severly sweet!