Undefined boundaries

 

 

Rushing gushes of air;;

Revolving with the clouds,

Running through unknown worlds;

Reaching the zeniths height,

Racing the winds;

Ringing the bells,

Re-painting the rainbows;

Rising to Heart’s elation,

I want to be like that KITE;

Whose thread is torn,

And its boundaries undefined!

Reviews

[Shalini Dinesh]

wow, kite with cut thread! nice ! i like it... keep flying in your imaginations... nice poem

[An owl on the moon]

I love the feel and flow of your words, and the message that reaches back into the free flight of the kite. Undefined... what a powerful longing in a world so conforming.

[Senseless whatever]

I liked the contradiction. Undefined boundaries and yet you created your own 'boundary' by starting each line with an 'R' excellent write.

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is outstanding. The flow of words and the story in the words was excellent. I like the ending a lot. And its boundaries undefined! Thank you.
Coyote

[Dimples87]

Wow, this is incredible. The rhythm of this piece is so powerful and the ending is so inspiring. I loved this! Great work!

[Sean M. Addams]

a very cool piece..enjoyed thios alot and the font on tis was cool too..nice job..

[MissWordSmith]

i liked the idea. a lot. the kite was a great idea. but, as a poem i thought it could have been much much better.

[harman kour]

i found this very deep and impressive... I was wondering what the thing is... and then the KITE whose thread is torn... very imaginative dear!!! I loved it totally and wanted to be like the kite and feel all these things!!! :)))

[deeps]

This is a wonderful write, enjoyed the font as well.

[Dev]

Nice write. I would say that its not as amazing as your work but good ! I dunno why I say that.. I think its because of the flow. Other than that the meaning is very nice :)