The Heart Vs. The Brain

Randonm thoughts compiled together...

 

 

The Heart is a soft creature,

fervently filled with endless emotions,

It is easily duped and easily devoted,

filled with anxiety, fear, love and passion,

the heart can bind two complete strangers,

It can separate a close relation,

At times it is loud and earnestly excited,

Sometimes all of a sudden it is mysteriously silent....

 

 

The Brain whereas is a clever creature,

Thought, contemplation being its relations,

Every step it takes with care and caution,

So that at the end there is nothing to repent,

It has a better sense of the right and the wrong,

And leads us to the path of honour,

Always on an alert no matter the hour,

the Brain should be trusted over the Heart is my thought...

 

 

Reviews

[Priya Seht]

r all ur poems on love only???
im looking out for something cool...
your writings are amazing.

[Inci]

great personification ...the special part is that u ended the fight and declared the winner in the end

[Nivruti]

"""the Brain should be trusted over the Heart is my thought..""" Yes,absolutely true!..u make grave mistakes when u listen to your heart..but your brain knows everything RIGHT!Your heart usually empowers your brain..and you are left with no other option! great work! very well differentiated!! :)

[Rachelle]

Your brain is the land of logic and your heart is the epicenter of emotions. You have to listen to both of them to be balanced. I like your poem. You've got a good point. Keep up the good writing.

[MissWordSmith]

forgot to rate~~

[Nathaniel Taylor]

I'm not too good at comments though I shall add the following sentiment:
Heart and Brain are wonderfully separated and re-connected in this piece. It sends a feeling of calm, and familiarity through me personally when I read this.
Good write!
95/100

[Princy]

*applause* wonderfully composed!! and your choosing the brain over the heart is well expressed... ppl can relate to this....

[Coyote Poetry]

You are correct in your poem. Brain usually lead us in the right direction. Heart is necessary to keep us human. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Avocations of Amber]

Head and heart, emotion vs. rationale........
Great descriptions here! It was nice to see your train of thoughts just pour into this as you expressed yourself. If only our hearts didn't cause so much trouble! :)

[deeps]

This is just plain brillant here!
This is amazing, I like this write alot.
Insightful and truthful. Lovely write!