My thoughts!

 

 

Like shadows arising from darkness,

Like the sun's appearance from behind the clouds,

Like a few drops of rain to the thirsty Earth,

Like the open vast sky for a captured bird,

I want my thoughts to reach the world!

 

 

I want to be an inspiration,

I want to be the pixies dust for those who want to fly,

I want to be a companion to a lonesome lass,

I want to make the nations together unfurl,

I want my thoughts to reach the world!

 

 

May strength be granted to those in need,

May truth prevail and falsehood fail,

May this world be made a better place,

May the enthusiasm in me never observe a dearth,

I want my thoughts to reach the world!

 

 

Reviews

[Sean M. Addams]

i liked this one alot..you express yourself very well on this one... great job!!

[Princy]

agreed with Devyani... very inspiring! =)

[Dev]

I hope your thoughts reach the world.. This write is really good and inspirational !! :D

[Nayan]

So strong message! And such a strong hope! Hope for a better world!

Let us all pray that your thoughts reach every nook and corner of the world, and vibrate in every heart, that everyone awakes and the barriers in the world break!

Really loved the poem. Really inspiring and thought provocative!

My chosen lines would be...

"I want to make the nations together unfurl"

"Like a few drops of rain to the thirsty Earth,
Like the open vast sky for a captured bird,"

"May strength be granted to those in need,
May truth prevail and falsehood fail,"

"May the enthusiasm in me never observe a dearth,
I want my thoughts to reach the world!"

:)

[Red Rose]

Well done! Great word choices.

[PoeT4994]

Nice. I think there was typing errors, but mine have those too, so can't dog that, loll. I like the idea behind it. And the metaphors.

[harman kour]

great poem with wonderful expressions!!!