"Empathy"

"Empathy"

A Poem by Valorie J. Shearer
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This is something that hurt me so... what else to do but write about it!!! Unfortunately. people are not always what they portray themselves to be..

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Sense before you speak.
Might your words hurt one's spirit?
Thus, wounding a bond!

© 2008 Valorie J. Shearer


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this is a completed haiku, how your sentences end on indivisual thought, not running as one complete
sentence, very well done and speaks insight, leaves the reader feeling an added sense of knowledge,
this poem can really speak to the heart of the reader if they let it, "empathy" in defining light, well done.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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this is a completed haiku, how your sentences end on indivisual thought, not running as one complete
sentence, very well done and speaks insight, leaves the reader feeling an added sense of knowledge,
this poem can really speak to the heart of the reader if they let it, "empathy" in defining light, well done.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Thus, wounding a bond!"

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Great piece. Wonder what it was that caused your pain?

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Valorie J. Shearer
Valorie J. Shearer

Cabool, MO



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I am so grateful to have stumbled onto this place, actually by accident.. or was it?.. ....... I was so inspired recently by someone who is very talented, and reminded me of how much I missed writin.. more..

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