Dawn Good-byes

Reviews

[Nishant Gupta]

nice one read mine too "QUEST OF LIFE"

[Dinesh Sairam]

"The moon no more awake, the sun not yet arise" - A long but 'plausable expression.

"Then you slip away from my embrace and take the blanket of my longing with you" - Awesome description of the parting of lovers. Though they're apart, they long for each other and you brilliantly out it as the two being in a blanket (of thought).

The last stanza felt like the ending of an old love movie, the sad sort. In all ways, the last stanza is a perfect envoy to ballades (Of course if the form is edited to match the rules).

A great write, Keep writing.

[This is the review that's gonna get me the '1500+ points' badge and I'm gonna add it to my library and give it a 100.]

[Emily B]

oh, the longing is so palpable. . . I felt the whisper on the wind

[Tomás Ó C..]

Both a lovely poem and graphic. Are you on Facebook at all?

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Wait for the morning dove, until then, the night is ours. lol just enchantingly beautiful.