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Reviews

[Norma J. Jessee]

The whole time I was reading this I kept thinking " To see the world through the eyes of a child is magical. Everything is fresh, new, alive and exciting. It also reminds me of a Bible verse. "You must become as a little child."
Your poem is magical,I keep thinking that "that one particle that is only you" is innocence When we perceive the world through innocence, then there is no motive, no reasoning, it just is. (pure and simple magic) I don't know if I'm making sense, What I'm trying to say is so hard to put into words or it may simply be that I just don't know the right words or form to say what I want to say
I know my review is turning into a book but you have touched a part of me ( through your poem )that has been yearning to be free for so long. Something I have been trying to say but have been unable to put into words, yet you have captured that elusive thought so well.
Your poem has touched me and reached the parts of my thoughts and being that I thought were untouchable.
And you have presented it so beautifully. What more can I say than ,this is as near perfection as we as imperfect humans can attain.

[Sarah Williams]

Fantastic write, my dear!!! This is a very well deserved feature! I love the way that you implore the idea that when we struggle to understand something with our minds, we rarely find the true answer that we are looking for, rather when we sit back and allow the answer to find its way to us, things seem to come easily. Beautifully written!

And the picture...amazing!!!!LOL

[Rie Sheridan Rose]

Congrats on the VERY well-deserved feature, hun!

[András Lá..]

you just love fairytales, don't ya

[Randall]

Loved the whole piece, even the picture. Loved the Imagry and the whole flow of the piece. You captured the whole essence of life in this poem. It is not for us to question why but to live and let lie.

[Jakuper]

The majesty of life is...LIVING IT! taking off the fear, the brakes, and the false facades of living happily ever after...

This piece expresses that very clearly...

[Blackbirdsong]

Your descriptive imagery, even the image you used, and your craft as a writer just shine in this Sylvia. It's such a wonderful journey of a poem and you had me transfixed from the first line unti the last.

"No, with your heart, your soul, with that one particle that is only You and yet the essence of the whole Creation."

This just took my breath away.

Thank you so much for your sharing your gifts with us.

take care :)

[Helen Woodward]

Thank you for sending this to me, it's a beautiful reflection xx

[Angie- Reading As Fast ..]

I agree with the reviews below... Wonderful piece! James sent it to me. I will thank him. It was perfectly executed.

[Just Manoosh]

Oh my ...... so powerful. So much energy and clarity combined. Truely amazing, talent like this should never be hidden. Thanks to James for sending this to me. Mx

[James K. Blaylock]

Wow, this is so very AWESOME! It is by far, my favorite piece I have read in ages! Thanks go to Norma for sending it to me, and to you Silvia for making it. Such a beautiful poem.