Dead to Me

Dead to Me

A Poem by Thanatos Darkraven
"

Just me venting at an ex

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You're dead to me

Always have been

Always will be

You never seem to get it

That I really despise you

And that you really make me sick

I don't know who lied to you

And told you that you're important

But here's your wake up call

You're nothing but a hoax

A poor attempt at innocence

Give up the act, cuz it ain't fooling me

You don't seem to understand

That I see past the facade

You can't hide the truth from me

Move on with your bullshit

I'm tired of being stuck in it

I've dealt with it long enough

I hope you realize

That you really screwed up this time

And that you're dead to me

 Yeah, we were once friends

But looks like those days died

And it's all your fault

I'm walking away from you

I want nothing to do with you

You can burn for all I care

Just get out my face

With all your bullshit lies

I'm tired of listening to you talk

All you do is run your mouth

You need to learn to keep it closed

And how to mind your own damn business

You're nothing but a fake

A two-faced friend that's good for nothing

Just go crawl back into the hole you came from

You aren't worth my time

You aren't deserving of my tears

And you certainly aren't worth keeping

I tried to make things work

I tried time and time again

But now, I'm done worrying over it

If you can't see what you had in me

Then that's your loss

I'm sure there's someone who'll see

Don't come crawling back

Forget about calling my phone

Just move on and leave me alone

You screwed up big time

I'm done dealing with you

You are, and always will be

Dead to me

© 2009 Thanatos Darkraven


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Ohhhh. You really have been hurt to come up with work like this !!! Well done and Thanks.

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is brillant. :)
oh thxxies for the reveiw,
glad you liked it. keep up your work!
-Ayimmi

Posted 16 Years Ago


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This write is so full of anger

While reading the poem, questions revolve in our mind and try to know what did happen between you and your ex

And it's amazing how someone can hate someone so much, i imagine it was very hard for you before it turned into such an anger

The last lines are amazing, which convey your feeling of desperation towards that person - you just do not want to hear him/her ... you want to make as if that person is dead

'Don't come crawling back
Forget about calling my phone
Just move on and leave me alone
You screwed up big time
I'm done dealing with you
You are, and always will be
Dead to me'




Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on April 11, 2009

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Thanatos Darkraven
Thanatos Darkraven

Melbourne, FL



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