Heartbroked

Heartbroked

A Poem by Thanatos Darkraven
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Written by a close friend of mine who shall remain nameless

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Even tho we r apart im still wishin u were here
all the joy i had inside has now been replaced wit tears
u have hurt me but imma be ok
i am ur soldier ill stand strong neway
u promised ull love me until the end of time
n u promised that i could alwayz call u mine
n i no you meant it wen u said dat u love me
but now the tears have clouded my vision n i cant see
im wishin u were here holdin me tite
fightin my struggles wit me through da nite
i no ur still here but i feel all alone
i no ur here but im facin da unknown
all i see is darkness there is no lite
so i have but one thing to do n dats to fight
but now i am wounded n yes its vital
n now i have died n da heat of battle
i wonder if u care but i no you do
y is my mind second guessin wat my heart nos about u
my mind says u didnt care but my heart says yea rite
she loved you sooo much n she treated u rite
my mind says to give up but my heart says no
yes u r hurt but she is still worth livin for
my mind says u wont worth it but my heart says u were
she loved you more than your mind could ever concure
she was ur SHAWTY the one dat you loved n cared for
she was the one that you promised u would be there for
shes da one that set u free from all the anger n pain
shes da one that cried wit u n 4 u n did it all over again
shes da one dat has your heart
n i no it hurts cuz u are now apart
 

© 2008 Thanatos Darkraven


Author's Note

Thanatos Darkraven
and YES this WAS typed in as it was written by him. So don't tell me about the shorthand and spelling. It was written as is and is staying that way!

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Added on April 17, 2008
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Thanatos Darkraven
Thanatos Darkraven

Melbourne, FL



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