Tears of the Soul

Tears of the Soul

A Poem by Thanatos Darkraven

My Heart is crying out for you

But you don't hear my pleas.

you walk the other way

As I drown in the Seas

Of shattered Dreams and Forgotteness.

My Soul is just a Ship

Tossed on the Sea of Lonliness

Torn by the Stomrs of Exile.

I'm fighting my way back to Shore

With nothing but your love as Guide.

But even as I make my way

My shoreline is no closer than the Day.

Now the Flames of my Hope have at last been extinguished

By the torrential Rains of Life and

The silent Tears of my Soul

© 2008 Thanatos Darkraven


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This is really good, it is very descriptive, and very well thought about. I took great pleasure in reading it and hope to see more of the same thing from you. It is very well rounded and very heartfelt. It is an honor to be reading work like this.

Posted 17 Years Ago


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Thanatos Darkraven
Thanatos Darkraven

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