Candy Man

With lips like caramel.

And breath so sugar sweet.

I feel like angel's knees,

In his presence would grow weak.

 

His skin is silky smooth

Of chocolate freshly melted.

He's perfectly hand crafted.

 

Every day I walk past him.

He'd be a perfect match for me,

if he didn't cost so much.

 

He's made entirely of candy.

Reviews

[Review]

Nice. great metaphor.
Good job! Keep writing!
**Review**

[Imara]

Suddenly I want to go to a candy store... lolz. I love it, cute with good similes (probably spelled wrong)

[Daydreamer54]

I like the figurative langyage used in this piece! Great write! ^^

[Sam Severn]

This poem is so beautifully crafted, n' so perfectly scrumptious, it gave me a toothache!

[Lime-Eater]

YUMMM!!!!! Lol! :)

[Muse]

This made my mouth water, lol!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A tired and remorsefulness piece, well placed, good read