Chapter 1

Chapter 1

A Chapter by argentum lumen

“How could he?" "He’s already dead” or the typical “Ghosts don’t exist.” or “You’re obviously delusional”. These are just some of the responses she imagined she would get probably accompanied with looks of disbelief or a roll of the eyes as if to say “Ya right”

            She couldn’t really blame them. Up until a few years ago she wouldn’t have believed her either, but after her near death experience she started to see these ghosts everywhere. She’d been in a medically induced coma for several months. If she hadn’t been in the coma she probably would be dead. She'd been in a bad car accident and had swelling of the brain from a concussion.

            Something went wrong in her treatment and even after she'd healed they couldn't get her back out of the coma. Those months were a painful blank in her mind. When she'd awoken from her coma she saw a man on her bed.

            "Why are you on my bed?" She said to the man.

            The man ignored her question and started to ramble.

            "I'm supposed to be getting out of the hospital today. I was admitted here because I had pneumonia, but they said I was doing better that I could leave later today, but they still haven't let me leave." The man said

            The man's face was panicked as if he realized something was wrong but didn't know what.

            "I'm so sorry." 



© 2011 argentum lumen


Author's Note

argentum lumen
This Chapter isn't done yet. This is the farthest i've gotten with the story.

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