Prologue through chapter 2A Chapter by argentum lumenThis is the preview I plan to have for my book when I publish it. Would you want to read more?Prologue Rose wandered through the forest
beyond the city limits where she was raised. As she searched her surroundings, cold darkness
coiled around her leg. It slithered like a slimy snake, clamping around her
ankles. Panic clawed up her throat as she disappeared into the gripping
darkness. Rose broke out of the void, darting towards an unknown destination on
the eastern side of the forest. She was drawn to a river---why there, she didn’t know. At the foot of the river,
Nightshade stood staring at Rose,
his eyes like pits. He was
frigidly animated. His pale, translucent skin radiated a threatening frost, and
his hair was so dark
it seemed to suck the light from his surroundings. The pointed teeth in his
mouth were bone
white, and when he spoke to her he seemed to chomp on the words in anticipation
of trying to devour her existence. “I couldn’t manage to kill her, but I will kill you. Only one of Nymph blood can destroy my mirror!” Chapter 1 Rose’s eyes popped open, and she
bolted upright in her bed, startled awake from her most recent nightmare. In an
attempt to shake off any remnants of the icy image and threatening figure, Rose got out of bed to
stretch her legs. Though she couldn’t
recall all of the details from her dream, she still found herself searching the
corners of her room, seeking anything that might be lurking. Her gaze landed on
the calendar hanging on the wall. She could hardly believe her birthday was only days away. Not just any birthday, but her sixteenth. It was time for a change. In previous years, she’d asked for
gardening supplies. But this year she’d grown tired of being the sole caretaker
for this greenhouse. This year she wanted her freedom. That was a wish she doubted
would be granted. Rose peered through the clear glass
of the greenhouse and saw her mother approaching from their cozy farmhouse, mere feet
away. In the distance, she could
see her father working the farmland as the sun rose, and she scrunched her nose and shuddered at
the sight of him before turning her attention back to her mother’s form. In
every direction, she could
see nothing but expanses of farmland. The only sign of civilization was the courier that visited once every few months.
This only fed her hatred for this place. Rose kicked a watering can in
frustration then
composed her face into a fake grin as her mother entered the greenhouse. As
soon as her mother crossed the threshold, she began her usual chattering,
causing Rose to roll
her eyes in irritation. Rose allowed her mind to wander to self-destructive
thoughts. Why
is she allowed to live freely? Why her and not me? She clasped her garden shovel
firmly and chided herself for the stray thought that crossed her mind. Hurting her to get away was not a good solution.
She would not resort to violence no matter how irked she felt. She wasn’t her father. “Rose, are you well? Do you need me
to bring you anything?” her mother crooned. “Yes, mother, I’m fine.” Rose gritted her teeth and
feigned a smile. Biting her lip to keep from screaming, she allowed her mother to
launch into her daily line of questioning. Which began with the obligatory
pleasantry of, “How are you?” Of course, the only response
allowed was, “I’m
fine.” Rose tried to listen, but her consciousness slithered back to her sinister inner thoughts. Her typical, curt replies flowed from her mouth without much effort. It was a dance she did with her mother daily. Meanwhile, Rose
entertained various scenarios of how she might express her frustrations to her
mother. The one that she kept returning to would surely land her in jail. Hitting her mother over the
head with a shovel would be momentarily satisfying, but jail was bound to be an even worse prison. Rose wasn’t about to go there to
suffer and die. Exchanging
one cage for another wasn’t
appealing. Some part of her still held onto the bright hope of escape. With a shake of her head, Rose tried to stave off her
rage. She just barely caught the end of her mother’s speech,
“...if you need
anything, just let me
know, and I’ll get it for you.” Rose mumbled out, “I’m fine,
mother!” and punctuated the sentence with her trademark eye roll. Inhaling deeply, Rose forced her mind back to what she desperately
wanted to ask about: escape"a relief
from constant imprisonment because she couldn’t take it anymore! As she opened her mouth to boldly
release her desires out into the open, she stumbled on her words and all that
came out was “Now
that I’ve become stronger… maybe I
can leave this greenhouse… even if it’s just for a little while.” Crimson bloomed on her mother’s
face and her head snapped around so fast the swish of her hair could’ve chopped down a
tree. A grimace spread across her lips. Her eyebrows were pushed together in a scowl. “But you are bound here! Do you wish to die, Rose? Leaving the greenhouse would be absolutely mad! Why would you
want to leave now? You're
still so young.” Rose whirled toward her mother and
screamed, “I'm tired
of being trapped here, Lailah. I want to explore the world. I've always wanted to leave. I never told you because I knew my staying
here made you happy, but I can't
take it anymore.” Having the audacity to use her mother’s first name only added to her mother’s anger. Lailah rushed out of the greenhouse so quickly that one of the
pins holding her hair in its hastily constructed bun fell to the floor. As
Lailah slammed the door closed behind her and locked it, Rose could have sworn she saw
her mother smirk for the first time in ten years. This only made Rose more determined to leave. She began
plotting her escape.
Chapter 2 That night, Rose used the hairpin which had fallen from
her mother’s hair to painstakingly pick the lock. Triumphantly, she sighed when
the lock gave way. Quietly, she closed the door behind her and snuck out of the
greenhouse under the cover of night. That first breath of crisp air and
the feeling of the
night breeze on her skin made her head spin in delight. Pure joy engulfed her.
She reveled in the
glory of the ground beneath her feet and bathed in the moon’s silvery glow. No
glass obscured its brilliant light tonight. Gazing around in wonder, she now understood she’d
rather die than continue living her life as an observer. Creeping over to the
entrance, she risked a single, swift glance towards the entrance of the house.
The lights were all
off, and she breathed a sigh of relief. Rose had to put distance between
herself and the greenhouse quickly or else her mother would capture her and
hold her in captivity once again. Being at the mercy of her fiend of a father was not Rose’s top priority. The
young woman wandered on until the heaviness of sleep curled around her bones. Then she rested on the hard
ground, planning to continue her journey in the morning. The warmth of the sun shining on
her face woke her. Languidly, she stretched her limbs. They were slightly stiff and crackled
as she stirred. The claws of sleep still clung to her even though she'd slept until mid-day. Rose brushed off the exhaustion
which seemed to come from her makeshift sleeping quarters, the ground, and
continued on her adventure. She noticed when she looked behind her that her
house was no longer
in view. At first, there was
only farmland and forest in her path, but after walking on for several miles,
she started to see the outlines of what looked like a city. That vague outline
urged her forward until she reached the village. Stepping foot into her first-ever village was better than any picture
her imagination could
conjure up and more vivid and lively than the descriptions in all the books
that she’d read, combined. The houses were crowded together like many flat-topped mountains. Gas street
lights dotted the city like fireflies, though none of them were lit in the bright
sunlight. With excited steps, she strolled towards the town, feeling triumphant and
successful in her escape. She had just crossed over the threshold into town when she collapsed to
the ground in a coughing fit. Victory crumbled before her as her knees slammed into the
rocky, dirt street and her lungs heaved the air in and out of her body. Her
knees tore open where she hit the ground. She began to cough up blood, staining
the ground an inky crimson red. All she could
think was, Why didn’t I believe her? as her dinner
from the night before made a second appearance, splattering onto the street.
Her hands trembling in pain and her violent coughing was the villager’s first impression of her.
She looked up, blood still running down her mouth. The violent pain racking her body momentarily subsided as
she gazed up at the handsome savior
before her. It was a
simple villager, a man. He spotted her pathetic retching form and lifted her
into his mail carrier. Rose only managed to catch a glimpse of her protector
before her vision went
black. **** When she came to, she felt the ground moving beneath her. She was in was a buggy, a small one
for carrying mail. Every so often, they stopped and she saw him grasp letters
from where she was
resting. For a while, Rose
simply took in the image of the man who had saved her. From behind him, all she
could see was jagged, short, golden-brown hair and olive
skin. He seemed to sense her stir, then, and he turned around and said, “I was starting to wonder if
you'd awaken. Are you
feeling better?” She
opened her mouth to say yes, but her chest constricted and her breathing was heavy. Her gaze darted
around, looking for her greenhouse, the only thing that could save her. “No. I need to get back to my house. I’m past the town just a few miles down the
road,” Rose gasped.
She gave him some directions, vague ones, but he smiled with recognition and pointed
his horse in the right direction. “I'll
take you there. You're
in no condition to travel,” the villager said. As Rose opened her mouth to gripe, she was stopped by the strange
man's input. “No
buts. Do you want to get yourself killed?” he said as his lips curled upward in
a smile. His eyes glinted with wit. “Fine,” Rose
huffed and pouted her lower lip in childish protest. A bright smile graced his face and humor danced across the emerald green of his
eyes in response. He turned back around to direct the horse towards her
village. Her chest heaved and another coughing spell ripped through
her. Thankfully, she placed her hands in front of her mouth just in time to catch the
blood in her palms. Black spots danced in front of her vision, and Rose fought to keep a hold
of consciousness as they traveled
back to her home. By the time they finally reached her house, her bones
rattled and her chest felt
as though it were
filling up with water. She was
becoming worse with every passing minute. Her clothes were stained the same
red-black color as
her hair. Rose rasped to the concerned face of the villager, “I must
return to the greenhouse now.” He looked to the greenhouse, the main house, then back at her. “Wouldn't you be safer in the
house"?” Rose cut him off and snapped, “No, I wouldn't. If you won’t take me to
the greenhouse, I'll
walk there myself.” Pushing
herself to her feet and trying to force her way to the greenhouse proved
impossible when her knees buckled beneath her. She collapsed to the ground, barely
breaking the fall with her palms before her arms folded like paper doll arms. Inching
her way towards the greenhouse brought to her mind the irony that she was now crawling towards
the very place she had tried to escape the night before. As she reached for the
greenhouse, strong arms grasped her waist and lifted her off the ground as if
she were as light as
a feather. Rose looked up to see the strange man, and was surprised at how he'd lifted her with such
ease. He carried her to the glass house as carefully as if she were a small child, though,
to Rose, his lack of
facial hair and softer features suggested that he was little more than a child himself. As soon as they entered the greenhouse, Rose was finally able to guzzle
in air. When she inhaled, it didn’t inflame her throat and the lead weight on
her chest lightened slightly. Her exhales weren’t wet with blood. Each lungful of air came a
little easier, but she still wasn’t
fully recovered. The vice still gripped her chest"not squeezing the life out of
her anymore, but squeezing nonetheless. “Can you take me closer to the roses?” Rose asked, nodding her
head in the direction of the white roses. He shifted her in his arms and then started striding towards the roses. As she got
closer, her breathing steadied, the urge to cough subsided, and the pain in her
lungs dissipated. By the time they had reached the roses, the only part of her
that wasn't healed were her hands. The hands were still numb and the
fingers moved clumsily from stiffness. “Can you put me down? I want to try to walk now,” Rose asked the man, and he
placed her gently on the ground. As she sat on the floor amidst the fragrant blossoms, she
reached a trembling hand out to stroke the rose’s velvety petals. Miraculously, the feeling began to return to
her hand. She cupped one of the blossoms with both her hands. For a moment, she
just stared at the
flowers in awe as she felt
them heal her ragged and broken body. Rose thought, It isn't the
greenhouse that keeps me here after all. It's the plants. Maybe escape is still an option. Rose pushed herself from the ground, only wobbling slightly
before she managed to find her balance. She looked the villager in the eyes and said, “Thank you for
helping me.” She realized
she'd never even
asked this man's name
or introduced herself. “My name is Rose. What would your name be?” “Gabriel,” he said.
As Rose
stared at her clumsy, bloodied hands, a memory of her childhood flashed before
her mind. © 2019 argentum lumenAuthor's Note
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Added on May 28, 2019 Last Updated on August 3, 2019 Authorargentum lumenFLAboutI'm 26 and love to read and write. I heard of this site from one of my friends so I figured i'd give it a shot.Since my hiatus from writerscafe I've done a few trips to far off places, and I spent 1.. more..Writing
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