so small

so small

A Poem by J.F.Viramontes
"

i just did it no thoughts just krizia and my mother and my f**k ups

"

say it say it say you love me

say you need me

say you want me

im lost you

know in the

deepths of me

kant seem to step

on the right steping ston

i try

i do

mum i realy do i want you to

know that im trying to do

what you want me to do but its hard mama

to do what you want cuz my tears bloch my

thinking like a flaim lit by a mach

so weak is the mach that

starts off so small

but soon it could grow

and down all would fall this tear is so small

so small yes indead but theres

much more to follow

and it shale bring me down mother

like never b4

© 2008 J.F.Viramontes


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a good mix of water - stepping ston -
tears -
and fire - the mach
and back to water - tears
- describing such angst with a passio
can't decide if Mama's an obstacle here to deeper feelings -
but then that's good because I'm involved...

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on April 6, 2008
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J.F.Viramontes
J.F.Viramontes

rio rico, AZ



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hi well my name is jesus viramontes i live in RioRico i have been writeing poetry 4 a very long time its always been something i loved i dont write in corect format but i love how i write because iv n.. more..

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