still not you

still not you

A Poem by J.F.Viramontes
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just i have this girl i with but evry time were together i call her krizia my exs name

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i feel your kiss i open my eyes your not there its her but not you i feel her hair its soft but not yours she smells like an angel should not like you but still i hold her as she falls asleep i know shes not happy she feels my epty love she knows my flaime burns for you and she hates me 4 it i kiss her neck she shrugs and holds my gaze i stroke her face forget her name remember yours im loseing sight iv lost this game youv wone i cant hold in.... my tears they fall she wipes them says she loves me and starts to cry gets up and leavs i hear the door open then close i hear the car engin start i dont look up she hasint pulld out i close my eyes and hope she leaves theres no hope when they try to love me my sole is lost my heart is cold you took my life you took it all im bymyself now cold sad i hear your voice i look up its not you its nothing just a wisper in the trees i lay my head down and think untill i feel your heart beat next to mine untill evry star up in the sky knows i belong to you i got work to do miknight knows what hes sayin and his words i keep on prayin they echo in my brain like a movie i see you lagh i see you run to me i see you dance i see you look at me then i see you leave my breathing stops my heart slows my body gos cold i die alone in an empty place for i know now that your gon......................................................................................................................

© 2008 J.F.Viramontes


Author's Note

J.F.Viramontes
its more like a short poem story kinda thing lol wierd huh

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Added on April 6, 2008
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J.F.Viramontes
J.F.Viramontes

rio rico, AZ



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hi well my name is jesus viramontes i live in RioRico i have been writeing poetry 4 a very long time its always been something i loved i dont write in corect format but i love how i write because iv n.. more..

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