Alone

Alone

A Poem by Niya Moon

No one knows my pain

No one knows my sorrow

Alone,

Alone.

 

Trapped in a place that

No one understands me.

Lost in a place where

Everyone rejects me.

 

Sinning is my past,

Redemption my presents,

Rejoicing my future.

 

I longing for the future

Unwilling to release the past,

God I wonder were are you

In all of this.

 

By my side

You whisper,

By my side forever

Never alone

Alone.

 

No one but You know my pain

No one but You know my sorrow

As dark as my world may seem,

Alone I will never be,

For You oh God are with me.

 

© 2008 Niya Moon


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Good way of showing that you are not accepted but you are willing to change for the better. God accepts you as you are just come to Him. Good write and good job conveying that to your audience.

Posted 14 Years Ago


WE all have a built in sense of right and wrong Niya but whether we choose to listen to that still small voice is our choice.

I enjoyed your spill of words in free form even though I am an old fashioned rhyme and meter poet

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Niya Moon
Niya Moon

Twin Falls, ID



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I love to read and write, I can't spell worth crap but I'm good with words and writing is what I love to do. I haven't published any books or storys yet but I hope to soon. Silver Moon will hopefully.. more..

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