Red Sky in Mourning

I am that forgotten voice on the edge of the world. 

Residing where the sun meets the sea. 

I am the beginning and the end. 

I push and pull like the tide.

I drag you under like the current.

I drown you.

Intoxicated 

Superficial

Delirium. 

Taste the tonic on my lips. 

Quench that desert thirst. 

Let me relieve you of your sailor's burden.

For I am a siren in the sea of false promises. 

Reviews

[Michael Iam Bone]

I like it a lot, the imagery is powerful. I don't have any major criticisms either, good job!