If I could describe to you

If I could describe to you

in perfect, exact detail..

the shimmer of her silhouette - wet against the Summer sky,

the bubble of her laughter,

the curve of her face

and soft, cold hairs running through my hand,

the rise of her naked thigh -

and valley of her waist.

The feel of her hard body on mine,

how we dueted seamlessly,

played games in the night,

used the world as our giant toy -

then broke

- fell out of the dream, still intoxicated

disoriented, gasping in shock,

with no idea how far into the honey-trap I had succumbed,

the ocean of sadness that rose in my loins and throat...

If I could make you feel it - all of it - exactly as I felt it,

would that be fair?

Wouldn't I just be dragging you in too?

To the place I so desperately need to leave?

Reviews

[PP]

Recreation of feelings! I like the concept :)

[sette]

so emotional the words in the poem expressed the emotions very well.