Something For You

From the flowerfields of my heart,

the fresh, Morningtown meadows,

and the silver cascading beauty of my soul,

I have something very special for you.

A warm smile.

This brightest, truest smile is for YOU, dear reader.

Searing sunbeams of whitegold,

loving heat energy,

and joy

for you.

I share this in the hope

that you may feel its warm pressure

feeding your skin -

invigorating,

revitalising

and comforting.

I share this in the hope

that its momentary flash

may light up your dark path -

just enough,

to show you the way forward.

But remember,

this is neither a gift

nor yours to keep.

Use it and pass it on

to someone who needs it.

For this is how things work around here.

My smile

is your smile,

is my smile. x

Reviews

[Afraa]

Professional you are! I don't care what your 'About Me' says. First off, this poem is very creative. From the picture, to the title, to the actual poem. The stanzas are very organized, and I can tell you took the time to think in this poem. Love the usage of description (one thing I always look for in a poem or story). It's a rather cold morning for me, and reading this warmed me from head to toe. Truly mesmerizing piece. It is going on my favorites!

[Woody]

simply uplifting! what a beautiful poem and wonderful gesture.
thank you for the smile. I'll make sure to pass it on :)

[ANTO]

Love the sentiment and the pay it forward aspect here mo chara. It reads smoothly and gently as it should - very good !

[NA]

Oh this is just beautiful...gives the reader a warm fuzzy feeling :)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Can you feel the heat radiating from this page.....
that is me smiling back at you...

This was a very charming read..... thank yo...

*Smiles*

[Muse]

Awe...my heart melted from the joy of a smile. It made me feel all mooshy inside...like jello..marshmellows....whatever.

Point being..how can one read this... and not SMILE????

[krish]

nice....when i was reading it,really i was enjoying...
it's very nice.

[C.R.Turner]

Thank you!

[Frieda P]

Pay it forward, will do! Thanks kind sir, I certainly need this warm, clever shot in the head today! :D

[C.R.Turner]

Thanks FP! Careful with that pistol! :)

[Frieda P]

ha I'm a pretty good shot, no worries! ;-)

[Carolann Dowsett]

That's lovely very warm and giving and uplifting. Thank you for sharing :)

[Ami Bovurd]

luv this its realy well written

[C.R.Turner]

Thanks Ami. Now go brush your hair! :)