Pieces of my Heart

When pieces of my heart fall onto the ground,
There is no sight to see, nor do I hear a sound,
All I know is the feeling of emptiness within….

©SW 

Reviews

[Stacy Purvis]

So sad, melancholy even. But this poem is Beautiful and ahhhmazing just like YOU! Great job!

[silentwriter180]

Thank you!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true. When heart is broke. Only we can feel the pain. Wonderful use of words and thoughts.
Coyote

[silentwriter180]

Thank you xo

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. I enjoyed your work.

[Neville]

Words that very many here and elsewhere will easily relate to & without unnecessary waffle.... Neville

[silentwriter180]

Yes, thank you.

[Neville]

you are welcome

[Chris Shaw]

Lovely expression here. I understand that feeling of emptiness. Well penned.

Chris

[silentwriter180]

Thank you!!