How Beautiful

how boring you are my dear

with your cold blank eyes

and your pale frozen skin

let me take you apart

look at you from the inside

surely things are better in there

let me examine your brain

and see what you thought of me

let me hold your heart

so i can know what it felt like to have it

i can not help but laugh

as the red drips down my nose

who knew you could feel so warm

i wish you could see yourself right now

beautifully vulnerable

completely harmless

i almost wish you would wake up

but i rip out your eyes instead.

Reviews

[Dante Balsote]

How twisted. :(

[D1218]

Hm .. I should have known from the lines:
'with your cold blank eyes
and your pale frozen skin'
That the person was dead .. I didn't see that coming when I read the title
Good poem though

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was really good. I liked it. I agree it was a little creepy though...thanks for sharing. :)

[Big_Mac]

You know I've felt that way before, very well written.

[David W Moore III]

little creepy, but well written.

[nono]

Nice job beautifully and well expressed keep up the good work!