Mattie

Close your eyes

And let the rain wash over you

Let the tears fall

No one can see them here

Take a deep breath

Let your pain be washed away

Feel the air fill your lungs

Feel your heart beat in your chest

Listen to the rain hit the ground

Smile as it falls around you

Open your eyes

Reach out your hand

I will always be here to take it

Let me kiss away your tears

And love away your fears

I am much to annoying to leave

and you are much to perfect to forget

 

 

Author's Note

i really need some reviews on this one i want to give it to someone

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Awe this was very cute. I loved the emotion in this. I think this is a great love poem to someone. That special someone will love you and cherish you forever. I think this was great. Thanks for sharing. :)

i believe u have perfected what many call a ~ love letter? I think the emotion is Perfect!

Definetly give this as it is in my opinion!

[Blossom]

its very nice. very different from your other poems, but just as beautiful. I love the flow of this, because it seems so natural.