True Friends Stab You From the Front.

 

 

Tumult of the mind,

Utter riots of mental stability.

This is what happens,

When your words penetrate my thoughts.

 

Lies! Lies! Lies!

My mind screams at you viscously.

But you show no care,

Because I aim not to hurt you.

 

Sit in my mind,

My words of venom.

As you say your’s aloud,

Because your only concern is you.

 

You show no hesitancy,

In affronting your friend,

You say lies factually,

Throwing the pity card, when I try advert.

 

And seem to know,

What you cant possibly see.

Let me be me, friend,

And I’ll let you be you.

 

 

Reviews

[Katrinka Johnson]

This poem has a lot of meaning and power to it. What you say is true, and true friend should have the strength within themselfs to stab a friend in the front it they're going to. They shouldn't linger in the shadow and wait untill you've passed. They shouldn't say anything unless they have the courage to actually confront you and say it to your face.

[Kory]

Very True I Believe The Same Views As Everyone Should Be Who They Are...No Fake Fronts...No Smiles That Behead Your Feelings....Loved It!!!!

[Dark Daughters]

I loved this poem too and you're right true friends will stab you from the front. Great job.

[Mr. Lopez]

You have such a beautiful and creative way of penning strong emotion to page , that I find it hard to believe that you are not an old, wise and well traveled confidant. You have taken the advice that once a gave and ran with it. Creating an elagent and powerful message for all to be lost in. Capturing your reader and holding their attention on your terms. "Let me be me, friend,And I�ll let you be you. " I love this line. This wisdom will carry you far in this harsh world.
Great Job !

[Cats Eye]

Aww, yes the rivarly friendship, it can only be continued when two people work at becoming one, if both do not work at it, its merly nothing but an aquntense gone bad.

[Your Tasty Field Adviso..]

so much truth inside the words. i think you have great tallent in weaving words together to become beautiful pieces of art.