In the forest of night.

Cold brisk air of night

Unwillingly subdued

Till I wake again

Reviews

[Jennifer]

ooh, chilly

[James Takeo Panton]

Simple
Deep
great work!

[Cats Eye]

The words you chose, make this poem very strong, and maybe even to some touching.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I like these tpye of writings.. 3 lines that say much.. i can feel the cold air in the forest and the being subdued .. unwillingly till finally awakening .. enjoyed this .
Chloe
xoxo