The Vampiric Lust

The Vampiric Lust

A Poem by Silent Pacer

Blood rolling down neck

Blinding my being to its drops

Fixation; deadly.

© 2008 Silent Pacer


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That Was Short And Interesting!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Dark and morbidly seductive.
Chloe
xoxo

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a dark young heart you have. I love to read your work because I admire the way that you grow. Like the tree in my profile , you will never stop growing and we will only benefit from watching. Try to expand a bit , hold your readers captive for a while but relentlessly. let them go on your terms only and they will love you for it. kep up the good work... we will be waiting for more.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 25, 2008
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Silent Pacer
Silent Pacer

Middle of Nowhere



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I'm Me, and sometimes me, but only half of the time, then I become something that resembles me. But in all seriousness, I am looking for constructive criticism about my work since I am trying to fur.. more..

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