Blotz Poems

Blotz Poems

A Poem by Silent Pacer
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These poems are nonsense poems that are just for fun. You make up a creature and them discribe him with the same letter the creature's species starts with.

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This is a Saturinium.

It lives in swamps, sewers, soup, and snickers.

A Saturinium eats suckers, sickles, seats, and signs.

It likes shoes, swords, sombreros, and sand

It snickers, smiles and dances with samurais.

Casually the Saturinium slides through the door,

Stolid a smile, then ran of with my silk shirt.

© 2008 Silent Pacer


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haha really interesting very creative and a good writing exercise.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a cool concept! I really enjoy this Blotz writing! Fun and imaginative. I really like this line...
"Casually the Saturinium slides through the door,"
I can just imagine what this looks like. Thank you for rocking my mind!



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting. Silly yes, it has a beat and shows creativity. I liked it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Darn him for taking that silk shirt. That was a nice shirt too.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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