Random Short Blurp

The reason I wrote this was cause I wanted a reason to use the word Forsaken...

Why Have You Forsaken Me?

After You Locked Me Up,

Then Threw Away The Key,

Your Influenced By a

Sublime Condition, An August Disease,

But Don't Worry, You're Not At Fault,

Just Blame It All One Me.

Reviews

[Mr. Lopez]

So witty and clever you are. Some times it is easier for someone to wash their hands of their dirty deeds by turning the blade on thee. Hard life lessons to learn in a few short veses. You never disappoint !

[Silent Pacer]

lol, yeah I do hate being blamed for others flaws, but unfortunantly, I get it allot. As long as I know that they're rediculous I'm okay with it... but it makes a good prompt for writing deep poetry.

[thecoolone52]

I enjoyed this hakiu... yeah dont you hate being blamed for other peoples mistakes... i do but inside i know im write so i dont care.... tubular write

[Kenji]

Haha and you used it nicely. It has an interesting message. Nicely done!