Autoimmunity

A poem

you were lost inside of me
made a positive ID
vaccines and sleepy teas
why am I so incredibly weak

werewolf in my community
you smell like a friend to me
autoimmunity
you're my ideal enemy

stop the ball swinging to demolish
all I need is a little polish
I'll be good if you let me stay
just a little more

werewolf in my community
you smell like a friend to me
autoimmunity
you're my ideal enemy

Reviews

[Sasha]

From what I could understand, you had a good rhyme and I appreciated the repitition. Beyond that, I didn't understand what you were getting at. I read your other poems and don't think they're bad, they're just vague for my taste.