Cries of the fallen one

Cries of the fallen one

A Poem by Sauav Karki

When Adam lies with Eve
in the beauty of the Eden.
I am lying here in grief;
thrown down from holy heaven.

Rainbows paved on their way
Glory steps on their feat.
I'm eclipsed by the day,
Where I'm freezing is where world spits.

Blessed are their sacred songs
Cherished - all that they said.
Look at what I have become.
This was what I was made.

Lord ran out of forgiveness
Slapped wrath on my face
I can't help, sin flows through my blood.
Don't listen to me, its all deceptive words,
Hasn't He warned you?

© 2013 Sauav Karki


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I'm assuming this is from the viewpoint of Lucifer, the Morning Star. I'd like to think that he's had a few moments of repentance throughout the long eons.

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