Not This Time

i got bored and decided to try to make a poem showing two different perspectives...tell me what yah think! :D

I know we’ve shared our share of problems

Been down the path of insanity

Attacked each other like savage animals

Lost all senses of humanity

But you’ve got to understand

That’s just the way we love

And know that I’m always here waiting

Whenever push comes to shove

I know I have my flaws

But baby, you’re no better then me

We can’t hide our imperfections

So let’s allow the past to remain history

We’ve both took the hits and denied the blame

And you know the reason why I act like I do

I love you and I’d go crazy

Because I don’t know what I’d ever do without you

So you’ve got to forgive me

And let us fall back into the same old dance

So what I’m really asking is

Will you give me another chance?

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Honey I’ve played too long

In this game that causes pain

You hit me but I never hit back

And you have driven me insane

And this isn’t love

Have you lost your mind

And don’t hold your breath

Because I’m leaving you behind

I have flaws I know

And I sure as hell know perfect doesn’t define me

But you didn’t have to shove it in my face

And throw me into misery

Yeah I know you’re hurting inside

But do you have to bring me down as well?

Always trying to stay in control

Boy you made me go through hell

And no I won’t forgive you

Not yet anyway

I’ve got to pick up the pieces you broke

You’re on your own starting today

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[Panda]

in the first line, "I know we’ve shared our share of problems" i meant to say "I know we’ve had our share of problems" lol sorry for the miswrite!