Stranded With You

I want to be stranded

on a deserted island with you



With blissful paradise

walking among wild flowers

and palm tree's



Holding your soft hand below

pink and orange skies,

then pick you up and carry you

alongside the current tides



Staring into your eyes

then gettting lost upon your lips


As you leave a cinnamon aroma

on my face from that first kiss



Lay you gently on the champagne sand

of sparkle glitter waves,

glide my fingers softly through your hair

then ask your body what it craves



Get closer to your beauty

then kiss you once again



Kiss you on your shoulder

and then again and then again




Leave your body prints above the sand

like sand dollars leave behind


Make love to you in every way

as I would slowly take my time




I exhale.....


....... Then wait for you to fall asleep




For when you do

I will dive into the oceans blue


Wait until the water curls,

then swim right out

with more than just a dozen pearls



And when you wake from cosmic rest

look below and feel your breast


You will find them covered

in a multitude of ocean bead's

planted, by the oceanic oyster seeds



I want to be stranded on a deserted

island with you


Not because it is the romantic thing to do

but simply,

just so I may have some time alone with you







© 2010 Orlando Murcia

Reviews

[SyberRose]

I loved this...so romantic...let me know when your book is published...I will buy it.

[Tasha]

This was romantic and I loved the imagery. Amazing write.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[x]

This is wonderful romantic writing here.
The island creating the sweet isolation, allowing for the focus to be only on the lovers. Especially enjoyed is the giving nature of the man in the write, such a rare commodity in these days of instant gratification.
What this reader thought was the best part of the write is the lengths taken to cherish the woman in both the love making and the gifting of the pearls.
Most enjoyed, thanks for posting.

[J.Black]

holy s**t. such crazy imagery! mmmm
"
For when you do

I will dive into the oceans blue

but, not until the water curls


Then I'll swim right out

with more than just a dozen pearls"

[Raven Wilson]

This is beautiful in its writing and and meaning. I normally do not care for pieces liek this but this was tasteful and appropriate :D