Just thought I'd let you know

You are so beautiful

just thought I'd let you know

The sun used to be blind

but then fought for his sight

to see your endless and most perfect glow

Because of you the birds sing even at night

the crickets play for you during the day 

and they play with pure delight

As I speak,

the sun continues to shine brightly 

What makes it even brighter is the moon

from yesterday that has still not gone away

You are mother natures daughter of summer

one of the most beautiful creatures

that God has ever placed under

You are the sea of unforgettable

How I long to sleep inside your dream

 

and swim across your oceans gleam

I yearn to touch your heavens skies 

then drown myself inside your eyes

I want to feel your solar skin

burn me deeply from within

My perfect day

My perfect night

The one who gave the sun

it's precious sight

Reviews

[Marie Anzalone]

You could melt the heart of the coldest woman on earth, Orlando. Always, always, always a pleasure to read your words... it's as if yuo dipped your pen into a flow of universal love and praise and spilled the words of its wisdom across the page

[Jamie S.]

So glad I got to read this right before bed, it really warmed my heart. Great writing, I loved every word :)