Fond of you

Fond of you

A Poem by Orlando Murcia



I watched  the sunset through your field of grains

as they swayed like wheat



You sparkled more than the diamond earrings

that you wore underneath the silent tree's



The breeze was perfect like your being

your skin was the footsteps left by the captivating sun



As the moth grew fond of the grass

I began to grow fond of you



We sat and waited for the night under the mistletoe

of the only star above us shining bright



I wanted to take your hand

and gently place it under mine


Make love to your aroma

then whisper rose pedals inside your mind



Get lost inside your eyes

from your gaze of colored space


Dance the night away with you

between the light's in twilights trace



Let you rest inside my sleep 

as I hold you in my arms


While I cradle you away 

under moonlit covered charms

© 2010 Orlando Murcia


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that was lovely

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is very sweet. So intimate. Love it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Ahhhh! Sweet love words, like I remember you can do. Touching the soul with you passion. Glad you still have the touch.

Posted 14 Years Ago


this poem tickles sweetness , mishel

Posted 14 Years Ago


I think this is lovely,mesmerizing...i love the way you began..the way you compared love with the small things around you...like the moth growing fond of the grass..i particularly liked that line...this is nice...

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is a beautiful love song . . .

wonderful

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Orlando Murcia
Orlando Murcia

Santa Monica, CA



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I am a writer who loves to write about Love, Beauty, Intimacy, and pretty much anything that hits me out of nowhere. I love writing for artist and anyone who appreciates the art of poetry. http://yout.. more..

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