Lower Than Rock Bottom

Lower Than Rock Bottom

A Poem by Shay

I feel like I'm running in a maze

or spinning on a hamster wheel

because no matter how hard I try

to get better

I always end up back at rock bottom

and somehow I've managed to get even lower

© 2014 Shay


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I was honestly feeling like this just the other day! I feel like this every now and then when my mom decides to put me down for who I am and how I act. Yes, life may often feel like a maze, but there is a way out. Just takes time and we shouldn't bother trying to rush it. Go at your own pace. And don't bother trying to be better for other people...be better for you! Do good for yourself, to help guide you to where you want to go in life. Think for yourself. Don't worry about what other people think.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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You'll never hit rock bottom as long as you don't give up. Hang in there and show life that you are never staying down. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

If first you don't succeed --- try and try again...
the thing about rock bottom...
there is nowhere else to go --- but up...
even if you fall greater into the abyss...
Hope above all is the way out...
PERSEVERANCE...there is nothing stopping you...

Posted 10 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rock bottom hasnt changed much since i last been here...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Ain't that the truth. It IS easier to get to rock bottom then to ascend from it.
But it ISN'T impossible to ascend.
Plus it's more rewarding once you get to the top.
Anyway, well done. ^^

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Shay

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Bluefire

10 Years Ago

No problem. ^^
Hi Shay,

The bottom is never easy to be at, but it is where every building starts. Stay strong.

-Matt

Posted 10 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shay

10 Years Ago

Thanks :)

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Shay

Toronto, Canada



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