Lower Than Rock Bottom

I feel like I'm running in a maze

or spinning on a hamster wheel

because no matter how hard I try

to get better

I always end up back at rock bottom

and somehow I've managed to get even lower

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

I was honestly feeling like this just the other day! I feel like this every now and then when my mom decides to put me down for who I am and how I act. Yes, life may often feel like a maze, but there is a way out. Just takes time and we shouldn't bother trying to rush it. Go at your own pace. And don't bother trying to be better for other people...be better for you! Do good for yourself, to help guide you to where you want to go in life. Think for yourself. Don't worry about what other people think.

[SonOfPlunder]

Sometimes this is a feeling that is hard to shake off, i think most people can related to this. Good work

[Sami Khalil]

This was splendid. Thank you for penning ...:)..............

[Shay]

Thanks :)

[Sami Khalil]

Welcome...:)....................

[Lucien Maier]

Nice expression of something most authors face. Short but very accurate good work.

[Shay]

Thank you :)

[@zeewhykay]

Eh... I can dreadfully relate to this. The hamster wheel never felt so real. Useless pedaling, hope evolves to nothing. Well done !

[Shay]

Thanks :)

[SabrinaThePoet]

Lower Than Rock Bottom, I don't know what that feels like and I hope I never do… good poem though.

[Shay]

Thanks :)

[Relic]

Two steps up and three steps back. Life never guarantees a smooth ride does it. Sometimes life just sucks. Keep writing.

[Chris Micha]

Hey Shay! I have been where you're at and I can say it's not fun. But I have found that writing aleviated alot of it and I'm more creative. Good piece!! I'll be watching for your next one! :)

[Shay]

Thanks :)

[Tina Louise UK]

I know the feeling hun..well expressed :) x

[Shay]

Thanks :)

[Erik Daniel]

Everybody has hit rock bottom at some point in their life. Just be strong and perservere. Don't rely on your strength, but on God's.

[Shay]

Thanks :) I'll try.