Love starts with.....

Love starts with.....

A Poem by sierrasparks91

Love starts with a hug and a kiss

You think that you found the right person

They treat you very nicely

The all of a sudden they just walk out of your life

Love ends in a teardrop and a broken heart

Once you started to trust someone

Then they hurt you

It's so hard to let your heart grow back into one piece

You hurt so bad

And all you want to do is die

And never love another person

Because of the fear

You don't know why

And you want god to help you not be so afraid

Love doesn't exist.

 

<3 Cici

 

© 2012 sierrasparks91


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thank you very much i worked very hard on this poem i appreciate that you like it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


'Then* all of a sudden they just walk out of your life.'

This was mildy depressing, but I understand that this is exactly what it feels like to have your heart broken. It's s****y.

I liked the line about your heart growing back into one piece. It gave me the visual of the heart growing back deformed from the pain it endured.

Well done.



Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on September 14, 2012
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sierrasparks91
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Springfield, OH



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My name is sierra but everyone calls me cici i am 20 years old and i have one son named Jaiden who is a year old. My son is 1/3 african american, 1/3 indian and 1/3 white. I am a very outgoing person .. more..

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