A Touch Long-gone

A bloke was single-mindedly in love with a dame but the latter executed her unwanted deed to part ways with that somebody for whom she was the world. She showered one of the sins upon him leaving him.

You vanished in the woods without a trace

Before I could yearn for that close embrace

You left me abandoned on a forsaken island

Never thought you would bestow me with a highland

I was head over heels in love with you

The day you departed, you left me in a blue

Now, the sphere is shattered and the soul is all whacked

The invincible spirit had me sacked

Glad you were when you left me in the lurch

I had no option residing my prayers at the church

Did you recall walking out on me

You took a deep sigh when you had a flee

I now grasped falling in love was hard on the knees

Never was I able to locate the keys

Keys that shone like a metal and unfastened the door

Wouldn’t savour the flavour of sanctimonious love anymore

Reviews

[John F Carver]

Keep at her! It'll come to you I'm sure, but either you or I wasn't quite ready on this one, your rhymes seemed forced to me.

[Siddharth]

I appreciate that Mr. Poika. I reckoned to pen down my thoughts. Just indulging in some brainstorming sessions to unveil the hidden notions on various aspects.

[John F Carver]

This second calls and I hear ingots crumbling to dust which in heat they were borne more pure? Just goofing around? But did you mind? I hope not.

[Siddharth]

Oh! Not at all. We seem to be the cards of the same pack goofing around. Yeah!