The Raven's Night

Its just a whisper in the breeze

A faint breath upon the leaves

Cosmic tale of two hearts scorn 

Love lost too soon to even mourn 

Desired me for all the wrong reasons

A test of time through the seasons

Take comfort in the raven's night

Cry out while the foul takes flight

Create pleasure from the kindred pain

Mend the scars that I obtained

Miles away from the crooked reality

Stuck at the Crossroads of eternity

I hear the call with a wretched might

As I take comfort in the raven's night 

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The usage of the rhyme scheme here...I wonder if you take the road less traveled with this verse...and give this another try without the rhyme...where this would go...or you could just leave as is...and be done with it...