Death to my Inner Child

Dancing with the shadows

 

On these bare walls

 

Taking comfort in chaos

 

My pride gets in the way

 

This is the the price I must pay

 

If I want to save the day

 

The hero in me/The love that I get

 

There's no savior/I must admit

 

Only the shadows knows my truth

 

Behind the door lies the lost child

 

The secret maze of lies and hates

 

Becomes harder and harder to navigate

 

The child inside wishes for a simplier times

 

The warrior shows no mercy

 

Death to my inner child

 

Only the shadows know my pain

Reviews

[Deanarrlack]

Quite dramatic. Good poignancy though some stronger word usage may be a good idea. i.e. less literal more lyrical.