I am free

It"s my first poem here.Just starting my poetic journey from here.The poem deals all about between the battle of person nd the world [:o]

I wanna be free
Down with the rules world makes for me

I wanna live my own way

I wanna make my own day

Down with the rules

they make

All they themselves break

Don"t they do it wrong ?

Then why should I?

Life should be free

They cannot stop me

I am not gonna stop,

not gonna refrain

Why?For your selfish gains

Try stopping me,you can not

Even if u try i shall not

Why should it be there way?

To make them happy nd gay

The  way they follow is bad

But that makes me glad.

Author's Note

Its my first poem so just cant help out :D

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

"The way they follow is bad
But that makes me glad."

Wow! What a great way to end a poem like this!
This is a very thoughtful piece of writing and keeping the fact that this in your first poem...I really need to admit that it's awesome..
The flow specially is great and beautiful rhyme..
I remember my first poem "Tears of mine" was first not quite appreciated but then...see I got such a great and overwhelming response from people here.
It's really a great write...way to go! :)

[Mistral Bilgera]

not bad for a first poem in this site. :) congratulations. the will of human to be free is nicely captured, but we must always remember that in freedom also comes responsibility. keep on liberating minds with your poem! welcome, Sid. :)