THE THREAD OF TRUST

 THE DELICATE THREAD
 THE THREAD OF TRUST
 WHICH CAN BE BROKEN
 CAN NOT BE JOINED

 EVEN IF JOINED
 JOINED BY A KNOT

 IS VERY EASY TO
 SEPRATE
 BUT TAKE AGE TO 
 BIND

 THIS IS THE DELICATE THREAD OF TRUST

 TRUST IS LIKE PAPER 

 ONCE CRUMPLED 

 CAN NOT BE PERFECT

 TRUST IS LIKE A MIRROR 

 ONCE BREAK THERE WILL 

 ALWAYS BE A CRACK

 THIS IS THE DELICATE THREAD OF TRUST

 TRUST IS LIKE ERASER

 GET SMALLER

 AFTER EACH MISTAKE

 

 

 THIS IS THE DELICATE THREAD OF TRUST

Reviews

[Riddhi]

I liked this poem very much and this is your best poem according to me...I really liked your thoughts..Thanks for sharing...

[siddhi]

thankyou if you think this is the best then please read spring meadows
thanks

your frnd
siddhi

[Akki]

Wow... nice thought...your poem is too good...
You can trust on me as friend, I promise I never break your trust...

Your friend,
Akki.

[siddhi]

i want see your picture how do you look are you handsome or what

just joking

your frnd
siddhi

[Akki]

Hmmm.... I am too bad in looks... you don't like my picture... it is too scary...

It's not a joke

your friend,
Akki.

[siddhi]

still i want to see it please i'll not make fun of it not even laugh

[siddhi]

to every one please give true review
i want them so that i can add more beatiful writtings
this is a humble request

[indian beauty]

The repetition helps it to flow well and it was an enjoyable read

[indian beauty]

This is definitely a 100 point poem, I felt all warm and wishful inside reading it. You've written an AMAZING piece.