spring meadows

A Poem by siddhi

in the spring meadows

i see some running shadows ,

all over the spring meadows.

butterflies everywhere,

as long ,as i see in air.

smell of flowers ,over the seas,

in all continents, across the fields.

all animals coming ,

out of their longing sleep,

with new freshness as we see.

a small child just came to me ,

and asked ,"will you play with me",

i said ,"yes i will be ,

what you want me to be".

i wish i could live that day,

again and again,

in every second in every minute of my life,

can it be that happy day.

© 2015 siddhi

Author's Note

do not hesitate i want true review.

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Georgina Cross

I love the imagery in this poem, the idea of freshness being seen rather smelt is intense and beautiful. Perhaps an extra stanza would have been useful to balance the theme of the poem, but nevertheless, this poem is beautiful.
I wonder if you would be able to check out my first poem on here?
Any reviews are much appreciated.
Once again, good work!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Devanshu Rajput

Made me feel refreshing. A great attemp conveying affinity towards gifts of nature. Rhyming makes the poem more powerful. And Siddhi, I will surely siddhi tjat u carry on to write such beautiful poems.

Take care.

D

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

thankyou deevanshu i was so happy to see this review
this is your frnd
siddhi

8 Years Ago

You're most welcome.

D

Devanshu Rajput

Posted 8 Years Ago

Great Aunt Astri

This is a lovely poem with great sentiment. And you are so young!

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

yup i'm just in school
thankyou read more review more

siddhi

Riddhi

I really liked the poem siddhi but won't review my poem???I am Riddhi and i am also a teenager..I hope we siddhi and riddhi can become good friends...

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

yup riddhi i'll surely review your works soon and we even can become gud frnds
thankyou for r.. read more

oh,that was nice and kind..it's like u woke up one day and realized that life is beautiful in this season.
You know, my name's Pranvera, which it means Spring in English language, and has exactly the meaning of a season.
I liked that, thanks for writing this.

hugs,
pb

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

thanks a lot pb in all my peoms this is my personal favrouite
i wrote it after seeing a progr.. read more

Solar

A sweet poem - I like the little 'i' - the innocence of its eyes.

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

thankyou solar

Akki

very beautiful & so sweet to listen too...
I was going in dreams in the middle of reading your poet.
It was so impactful : )
Tussi maan gaye kudiye ; )