Faded Fragnances

My first poem so please dont make up a plan to kill me for it. Be honest and give review.

Faded skies covered by the blanket of fire from the drowning sun.

Fragnance of winds flowing like waves into the nostrils,playing with every possible sense.

All the coloured lights fulfiling duties of their lyf as if there is no another day left.

Cold winds helping the helpless,Spreading the beauty of existences,giving the sense of winterly heaven,playing the game of "goosebumps"


Walking on the wet road doesnt seem tiring anymore.

And then there's a "She",whose memories doesnt seem like memories anymore.

Today I just am wishing,if i could forget about the concept of Time,concept of "Past and Present",concept of 'Truth',concept of 'Concepts'.

Life always have been a crazy long ride,and it always will be,but she was just not meant to be a station.

Her memories are my tracks,her smile is award of my existence,her agonies are my challenges and "She" is my favourite song!

This society is the heavy rain to my harvests,A earthquake to my house of dreams.

But i am her vocalist and i always will be!
None could fight my dreams or my senses and i will always be close to her Today,Tomorrow and all the lives i have left! 

Author's Note

ignore grammar,commas and everything you must!

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"Life always have been a crazy long ride,and it always will be,but she was just not meant to be a station.

Her memories are my tracks,her smile is award of my existence,her agonies are my challenges and "She" is my favourite song!

This society is the heavy rain to my harvests,A earthquake to my house of dreams."

A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:)........................

[shallimarRose]

I see some places where grammar may need a bit of help but I love the expressive lines you use..
"Cold winds helping the helpless,Spreading the beauty of existences,giving the sense of winterly heaven,playing the game of "goosebumps"


Walking on the wet road doesnt seem tiring anymore. " Love this.. Thank you.. sR

[New Theory]

It is a beautiful read.
Good work.

Can you please review one of my book? Arcane Records-Case 1

[Thea]

This is beautiful. I am simply astounded by your topic. You had me thinking about poignant things. Hahaha. Well done.

P.S. I PM-ed you for a more detailed review. Hope you read it. :)

[siddhanth lodha]

@vidya thanks a lot for your time and your revies.it means a lot to me :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is lovely my friend .You have a wonderful command of your words.I really enjoyed it .