Valley of Dreams

I walk down the valley

Set deep within my dreams

The lush green fields

The dancing daffodils

I gaze up at the azure sky

Serene in its embrace

When I see you

My angel from that sky

I move closer to you

Enveloped in your warmth

And I hold out my hand

Just to touch you

A fire inside me burns

A longing just to hold you

And drift away

One with the clouds

I remember the days

When you were mine

That warm embrace

And the gentle touch

I gaze in your eyes now

And tears, they flow

I hold your hands

And ask you why

“Why did you leave me?

In this world alone

To the Lord you went

Your warmth I need”

“Hold me close

In your loving memories

Love me forever and

I will live in you”

You say these words

And smile at me

I embrace you tight

To never let you go

I watch alone in reverie

As you fade away

Till I meet you again

In my valley of dreams.

Author's Note

This is my first attempt at a love related poem and frankly I'm really doubtful about how it's turned out, so tell me what you think!

Reviews

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😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢 Sorry, but I ain't joking.

[anxia]

This is you first attempt at this?? And this is so awesome already! You wrote it so definite like you experienced it.
Infact, i was wondering but then saw the authors note. Loved it.

[rnuff]

This is wonderful enjoyed the read

[Sid]

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!

[Damien Davison]

I believe it turned out good! Sometimes your style with the rhyming trips me up, but I take the time to reread and am always pleased when I take it in. Nice write!

[Sid]

Thank you for the read and review!

[Frieda P]

It's so melodic, made me smile. :)

[Sid]

Thank you!

[Jem Sagcal]

I loved reading it. I love the romance, the sweetness, the imagery and the idea. It's truly beautiful! Amazing piece!

[Sid]

Thank you, glad you like it!

[MOON]

Beautiful write full of hope for love.

[Sid]

Thank you, glad you like it!

[Salar Majak]

this one is very good for a first try, i didn't try to write in that feild either, don't know if i will, but anyways the sadness it holds made me think alot of things. good job

[Sid]

Thank you, glad you like it!

[Felecia]

I would've thought it was love related even if you hadn't told me it was! You'd did an amazing job with it, don't doubt yourself! You did an good job for your first try (better than me...I haven't even written a love related poem XD i need to try that...)
It was beautiful and well written. It just sings love! ;) Great job!

[Sid]

Thank you, glad you like it!

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A sad but yet a hopeful piece. Nicely written,
Thanx for your review as well

[Sid]

Thanks for your review too!!