The Last Breath

We live, we die,

Caged forever, to all we lie,

Ere the final goodbye,

After the last breath, we fly.........

Reviews

[sarah]

This is an amazing write it has a great emotional flow to it. Great write!

[Sid]

Thank you, glad you like it!

[Mia]

Truth and wisdom. If ever there was an appropriate time to use the phrase 'short and sweet' this is it!

[Sid]

Thank you!!

[Sami Khalil]

Words of wisdom. Thank you for penning.

[Sid]

Glad you like it!

[Sami Khalil]

:)

[Coyote Poetry]

It made the story true and simple. I like the logic of your words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sid]

Thank you!!

[KAOlmsted]

And there it is...the summation of life in 20 perfectly chosen words...very nicely done.

[Sid]

Thank you!

[dunnia]

short, simple, and beutiful.........very much liked it

[Sid]

Thank you!!

[rnuff]

simply amazing love this write

[Sid]

thanks a lot!!