A Love Song

All the people I have met

All the things I have done

All the memories I have kept

All the roads I’ve walked upon

 

All of them lead to you

For you’ve always been...

the

only

one

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[AmandaN]

Beautiful, I like the power I feel in the last 3 lines, thanks.

[Lipstick_Lesbian]

I absolutely loved this. I read the title and expected a cliche, convoluted piece. But instead I found this -- refreshing, concise, creative, and original. A joy to read.

[William Maisonave]

This is perfectly structured. Concise, powerful, breezy. well done!

[Cassie Fraga]

aaaaaawwwww..... sooooo sweeeeet.... its so sweet ima pretend my honeybee wrote it just for meeeeee!! hehe!!
((lucky is the one you pen this for))

[An owl on the moon]

You've breathed a voice on the winds of love's miracle... that one person who completes and fulfills you like no other could. May we all find that one for us...

[Marie]

If you wanted to make your first four lines ryme and scantightly you might try:
"All the people I have met/All the things that I have done/ All the memories I've kept/All the roads I've walked upon."
But your poem is fine and graceful as it is...

[Jasmine]

Not particularly original, but then love poems rarely are.
A satisfying write.

[Babe Roxx]

Lovely...short, sweet, and to the point. Well done.

[Marie]

This is a beautiful love song, showing how all paths meet in the beloved...

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Soft and gentle like a summer rain that leaves a beautiful rainbow .. All those people and roads lead to love. I really like the title you chose and the poem is like a love song.

Chloe