Primal Night, Burning Moon

Primal Night, burning moon

Borne of the fountain

of eternity and immortality

Caressed by the zephyrs

of peace and tranquility

What secrets lie clasped

in the stillness of your silence

What eternal pain do you suffer

by the electric lightning

that splits across your ribs

 

Dawn is a denouement of love

between two unrequited lovers

destined to suffer alone

And Day scorned as it is

goes on inflicting pain

on eternally scorched Earth

guilty of being ruined

by your sweet embrace

 

Author's Note

Bitten by the Pablo bug.

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is Beautifully written... It reminds me of a movie titled "Ladyhawke" (1985) with Rutger Hauer and Michelle Pfeiffer...

"Dawn is a denouement of love
between two unrequited lovers
destined to suffer alone
And Day scorned as it is
goes on inflicting pain
on eternally scorched Earth
guilty of being ruined
by your sweet embrace"~ Absolutely captivating!!

[Ed Hart]

there's a lot of things around called 'love', that really isn't

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Thanking U for sharing esteemed lines. With wishes.